Chocolate Mango

This is my first game. 

I have never made any before and decided to give it a shot.

Development time: a week (chosen to actually put a project out)

I think there were some successes and failures personally.

• Success: art turned out to be pretty cute and I am very happy with the minimalistic characters.
• Failure: the writing is genuinely a little weak. I didn't expect how different it is to write a VN vs a regular novel. Also, it's a bit hard to tell when a different character is speaking. 

Please leave some feedback for me (which area should I try to improve in most?). Thank you! <3