Vonbrigði

I suggest you don't read this if you don't want mini spoilers but here we go, this game is about a boy named Orvaenta who grows to an age where he can go on his first true adventure and meet the king of the kingdom he lives in, but there is a nasty surprise awaiting him at the end of his "journey". it is a very very small game like 10 minutes or a bit more of gameplay that i made for the brackeys game jam 2022 on rpg maker MZ i hope you guys can rate it and give me a ton of advice on how i can improve my game design and my storytelling