Gamebook proto

Hello everyone, My name is Ben, I'm an indie game developer with 10 years of experience in video games. I'm working on a prototype for a gamebook series. I'm very interested to have your feedback about it.

Is it interesting? Would people buy such game or not?

The game includes only the first chapter of the first story which can be done in one hour/one hour and half if you die once (final version will include several stories with 5 chapters each).

There is a form accessible from the main menu of the game.

Every feedback would be really appreciated! 

My game Discord if you want to join the tribe: http://discord.gg/mGDe5Sy