Outcast The Forgotten Land's

This is my first game so please tell me if anything is wrong and I'll try to get to is as soon as I can. 

It is a platformer that is about you being sent out on a mission by the king to explore the unknow and forgotten land's. And to give all the information you found on your journey to the king as soon as you can. So he is able to know what kind of threats are out there so he can defend the kingdom better.

That's the story of the first game if you guys and girls like it enough I'll start to make a 2nd game. Or even make it a trilogy.